自薦信的錯誤例子

① 自主招生自薦信郵寄出去發現錯誤，還有辦法補救嗎急急急

1.馬上來打電話給招生辦自的老師，態度好點。一般都沒事的。告訴老師你馬上補交。
2.馬上手寫，既然是學校規定，這個肯定是沒法改的，招生辦的老師很多都是年輕老師，他們也是按規定辦事，但是時間和選擇權在他們手裡，就要看你周旋的能力了。

② 英語自薦信1

以下意見僅供參考，謝謝！
1.democracy是名詞不可以做定語，可以改成「名主的」形容詞：democratic

2.She give me a lot of freedom 那個要加S

3.falsity用法不對，一般是虛偽的意思，要寫「錯誤」可以用：fault

4. My dad is a knowledgeable man who can answer my questions mostly and always take interesting examinations with me.這句的TAKE要加S。

5.Because of them，聽起來不爽，不如改成「Thanks to them」
6. this time they both agree with me to apply ASSIST ,這句把前面改成「both of them」比they both 要好

7.Without them, I cannot be so confident that I want to be an exchange student in America alone.這句話應該拆成兩句說比較容易讓人看懂：without them, I would notbe so confident. I want to be an exchange student in America alone.

8.but at school I change a lot.可以說：but school life changes me a lot.

9. I have a good health since I』m child because of lots of exercise with my father and I』m good at football which I』ve been playing more than 8 years. 這句同樣太長了，要拆開：I am in good health since I was a child, because I do lots of exercises with my father. I am good at football as well, which I have been playing for more than 8 years.

10.Even I got an silver medal with the shot match in middle school.
你是要說「我在中學甚至得過短跑銀牌」？那你可以說：Once in middle school, I have got a silver medal in a short distance race.銀牌用A不用AN。

11.both in last school and now你是說：「在我以前的學校和現在學校」么？那你可以說：both in my former and present school。

12.plans to take part in a body mechanics 你不可以用PLANS要用PLAN

13.Not only sport but also art is my interest。這句也有問題，你可以說：I am interested not only in sport but also in art.

14.The dance named the Persian Cat 不必說的這么復雜，《波斯貓》可以做同位語，就說：The dance Persian Cat就OK了
15.got the first wards 請問WARDS是不是寫錯字了啊？一等獎是the first award或者the first prize.

我盡力了。、你看著辦吧

③ 下面是某中學高三學生參加高校自主招生所寫的自薦信，其中在表達和格式方面有三處錯誤，請把它們找出來並