1. 在出國留學文書中如何描述工作經歷
留學個人陳述PS是Personal
Statement的簡稱,是我們申請美國研究生院的重要材料之一。一份完美的有可能使你申請成功的機會大大增加,同時PS也是很好的認識你自己的過程。通過寫PS,你將更了解你自己,清楚自己想要什麼樣的生活,理清自己為什麼要去美國,以後將要成為什麼樣的人。
這對申請者來說至關重要,對admission
officer來說,PS是你唯一有機會向他們展示一個鮮活的你的材料。成績單是死的,GRE和TOEFL分數是死的,而他們要找的是一個活生生的人,是一個有血有肉有思想的人,他們在眾多的申請者中尋找最適合他們的那一位,你如何認識你自己?你的motivation來自哪裡?你將來如何打算?這些東西都可以幫助他們走進你,了解你,認識你,然後決定是不是接受你。
U of Washington的admission officer指出,他們會把申請者分成四等:"Admit with guaranteed
funding, Admit with potential funding, Tabled (a sort of admissions purgatory),
and Reject." It is in the case of "Tabled" and "Admit with potential funding"
applications, the admissions officer reports, that the personal statement can
make a real difference: "If there is a good match between the applicant's
research interests and the particular strengths of the school, this can bump
them up a level or two in the hierarchy of admission."
如何寫留學個人陳述?從PS教程中,我將總結出寫PS的各項注意點,一步步教你怎麼寫PS,希望對大家有所幫助。
Preparation
PS的精髓在於將自己的motivation和Objective充分展現出來,它應該是personaland analytical,
任何generalization都需要避免,PS的關鍵在於用specific, personal
details來展現你的個人魅力和強烈的motivation。
寫PS時,要盡量完全的真誠。這是訴說一個你自己的故事,你不是在設法創造一個理想的申請者,而是just be
yourself。任何的偽造都是很容易被識破的,只有完全敞開的真誠,才能真正打動admission
officer,也才能真正的認識你自己,才能真正讓你選擇最適合你的graate program。
用specific details來展現你的motivation很重要。這些specific
details可以包括研究和工作經歷、課程、你跟你所感興趣的領域的人的交流、你讀的書、你參加的學術報告會,以及任何可以展現你為何選擇並適合這個研究領域的原因。
你需要明確你未來的方向,至少為自己未來5~10年的事業做一個規劃,而這個規劃應該很適合你所申請的這個graate
program,那也正是你選擇這個領域的原因。
描述為什麼這個graate program適合你,不要用一些空洞的贊美性的語言,一定要be specific, be
analytical。
一定不要出現一些粗心的錯誤,那隻能證明你不夠認真對待。
避免說一些空洞無意義的套話,避免陳詞濫調。這里可以舉個例子。
修改前:In the first project Imanaged, I learned many valuable lessons about
the importance of teamwork.
修改後:In the first project Imanaged, I made an effort to incorporate all my
colleagues as equal members ofa team, soliciting their feedback and deferring to
their expertise as needed.
修改前的這句話很空洞的講team
work,沒有任何details;修改後的話就展開講了我是怎麼展現teamwork的。在寫PS的時候一定要注意展開這些細節。最好的方法就是以自己的親身經歷開始,讓那些展現你的quality和personality的東西自然流露出來,你的那些品質不需要總結性的generalities,
人們會從你對自己經歷的specific details的描述判斷出你有哪些quality。
不要企圖把你所有的經歷都寫進PS里,PS追求的不是廣度,而是深度。好的PS是深入挖掘一個或兩個主題、時間或觀點的細節。
注意避免敏感話題,因為你不知道admission officer的個人偏見。
不要用冗餘的長句。短句更加有力,因為他們更加direct和to the point。舉例:
修改前:"My recognitionof the fact that the project was finally over was a
deeply satisfying momentthat will forever linger in my memory."
修改後:"Completing theproject at last gave me an enring sense of
fulfillment."
像the fact that這種詞就是完全冗餘的。
Brainstorming
1. Performa self-inventory of Your Unique Experiences, Major Influences,
and Abilities.
Long and short term goals
1. 這所學校為什麼吸引你
2. 你對哪個faculty的研究最感興趣?你最想跟誰一起工作?
3. 你具體想從你所申請的program中獲得什麼?
4. 你的事業抱負是什麼?這個graate program對你實現事業理想有什麼幫助?
5. 你理想的工作的是什麼?未來的5~10年甚至20、30年,你想成為一個什麼樣的人?
Skills and Characteristics
6. 你有哪些品質有助於你在該領域獲得成功?You need to make strong connections between your
experiences and the qualities you wish to convey.
這里列舉一些admission officer認為很重要的qualities:
? Seriousness of Purpose (to pursue graate ecation)
? Intellectual Ability (to handle graate study)
? Intellectual Curiosity (about the field you wish to enter)
? Creativity (as reflected in the way your mind addresses issues in the
field of your choice)
? Open-Mindedness (to ideas, people, and circumstances different from your
own)
? Maturity (as demonstrated by being responsible and trustworthy)
? Concern for Others (either by devoting time to social service activities
such as tutoring or by being considerate and empathetic to others' feelings; the
latter is more difficult to pull off in an application essay)
? Initiative (as in the ability to start a project or take on a
responsibility on your own)
? Enthusiasm (as demonstrated by your eagerness to engage in
activities)
? Confidence (in your ability to handle difficult situations and novel
challenges)
? Being Organized (as in the ability to stay on top of multiple tasks)
? Sense of Humor (as in your ability to find humor in difficult situations;
in many ways this is an index of maturity)
? Diligence/Persistence (as demonstrated by your ability to stay with a
task until you complete it; this is particularly relevant for programs requiring
a dissertation)
? Leadership (as shown in your ability to inspire others to work together
to reach a mutual goal)
? Risk Taking (as shown in your ability to deal with uncertainty in order
to reach your goal)
? Insight (as reflected in your ability to use introspection to understand
aspects of yourself, such as your preferences and your motivations)
? Optimism (as reflected in your ability to find positive aspects in
seemingly negative situations)
? Compromise (as in your ability to be flexible in negotiating with others;
at a more abstract level this can mean the ability to reconcile ideological
opposites or dialectical pairs among others or within yourself)
? Overcoming Adversity (as demonstrated by your resourcefulness in dealing
with serious problems such as divorce, death, illness, etc.)
7. 你所擁有的skills(比如communication,leadership, analytical),注意用specific
details來展示你的這些skills
8. 你比其他申請者的優勢在哪裡?
9. 你可以貢獻給你所申請的學校哪些東西?(給你的fellow students,你的faculty,你的broader community)
10. 你認為你為什麼會在這個program的申請中勝出?
11.讓admission officers對你感興趣的最compelling的原因是什麼?
Background/Accomplishments: Personal
12. What's special, unique, distinctive, or impressive about you or your
life story? What details of your life (personal or family problems/history, any
genuinely notable accomplishments, people or events that have shaped you or
influenced your goals) might help the committee better understand you or help
set you apart from other applicants? 哪些人影響了你的選擇?
13. Have you had to overcome any unusual obstacles or hardships (e.g.,
economic, familial, physical) in your life? 你所必須克服的困難?
14. Have you borne significant care-giving responsibilities for family
members? For an ailing parent, a sibling, a disabled or aging relative, a child?
How has this impacted your academics? Your professional life? Your goals and
values? 你從小就需要照顧什麼人嗎?囧,這點對獨生子女不利哎。。。
15. (If you live in U.S. but are not a native-born American) How did you
deal with the challenges of moving to the U.S. from your home? Did you
experience culture shock? How did you adapt? What was most difficult for you?
What aspects of your new home did you enjoy the most?
在美國如何適應的問題,看來美國交流經歷還在這個personal方面可以起到一些作用~
16. If work experiences have consumed significant periods of time ring
your college years, what have you learned (leadership or managerial skills, for
example), and how has the work contributed to your personal growth?
Background/Accomplishments: Academic
17. When did you originally become interested in this field? What have you
since learned about it-and about yourself-that has further stimulated your
interest and reinforced your conviction that you are well suited to this field?
What insights have you gained? 你如何對這個領域感興趣的?
18. How have you learned about this field-through classes, readings,
seminars, work or other experiences, or conversations with people already in the
field?
19. Are there any gaps or discrepancies in your academic record that you
should explain?
20. Can you recall a specific incident that convinced you that you had
chosen the right career path?用一個具體的事例來證明你為何選擇了正確的道路
2. Consult Friends, Relatives, Colleagues, or Professors for Ideas
別人往往可以看到你性格特徵中你自己沒有注意到的地方,所以向別人請教可以幫助你更好地了解自己。不妨來做一個調查問卷,向了解你的請教~
I am applying to _________ and must prepare a personal statement as a part
of that process. I want to be sure to include all relevant data about myself and
my background, so I am soliciting information from various indivials who know
me and whose judgment I value. Thank you for your help.
1. What do you think is most important for the admissions committee to know
about me?
2. What do you regard as most unusual, distinctive, unique, and/or
impressive about me (based on our association)?
3. Are you aware of any events or experiences in my background that might
be of particular interest to those considering my application to graate
school?
4. Are there any special qualities or skills that I possess that tend to
make you think I would be successful in graate school and in the field to
which I aspire to become a part?
2. 工作幾年 出國留學 工作證明怎麼辦
工作之後申請留學的話,從某種程度上來說應該比在校學生具有額外的優勢,因為國外很多研究生專業都要求有工作經驗或者具有工作經驗的優先考慮,特別是管理、經濟、金融、商學、法學等等。
申請成功的重要因素首先是語言成績(托福,雅思等)和GRE、GMAT或者LSAT的分數(僅美國研究生需要GRE、GMAT或者LSAT成績)必須達到所申請學校和相應專業的最低錄取分數。然後接著是你的CV(簡歷)、PS(個人陳述)和推薦信的作用。你的工作經驗可以讓你的簡歷和個人陳述增色不少。
申請好學校的難度關鍵是看這個學校是否熱門,綜排和專排是否名列前茅還有更重要的是你自己的實力是否過硬、申請策略是否得當。如果現在下定決心工作後出國的話,建議現在就做准備,准備越充分勝算越大。
工作證明,你若是以前離職有的話,出國申請提交材料時一同提交就可以了
但是若找不到了的話,你最好去以前工作地方辦理。
出國留學 工作證明 (樣本),供參考
工作證明:
茲有XXX同志於2013年7月至2014年11月在我XXX公司工作。該同學在工作期間善於學習,認真履職,遵守紀律,遵守法律,出色地完成了公司交給的各項工作任務。
此證明
(單位蓋章)
2014年12月18日(時間)
3. 出國留學,開具了工作經驗證明,回國後是算應屆生還是往屆生
只要是有留學回國證明,
2年內即可落戶,
不管回來前,是在國外兼職打工,還是全職工作,都沒關系,
關鍵是回國留學證明2內有效,
憑藉此證明辦理學位認證,
然後落戶中國任意城市(如北京,上海,廣州)。
4. 有工作經驗後出國留學
想要出國留學,不知道如何選擇學校,你可以通過這個留學定位系統http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_1371d3a4c0102xe7e.html給自己一個定位看回看,輸入你答的GPA,專業,語言成績,學校背景等,系統會自動匹配資料庫中情況與你類似的同學案例,你看他們都申請到了哪些學校,並了解TA的辦理中介及最終錄取結果,為自己的留學方案提供參考。結合自身情況也能有個大致的定位。
也可以按照留學目標來查詢,看看你的目標院校和專業都哪些背景(語言成績多少分、學校背景如何、什麼專業、GPA多少等)的學生申請了,也從而對比自身情況,制定大致的目標和方向。
5. 有工作經驗後出國留學,可以嗎
出國留學,以自己的水平能申請到什麼層次的大學?可先對自己目前的情況評估下院校。
6. 有工作經驗後出國留學
你好,關於有抄工作經驗後出國留學襲?
1、你的大學是國家重點大學211、985,可以申請前30名的大學。大學成績差的話,要努力考GMAT、TOEFL,如果這些考試成績分數高點的話,是可以彌補一下的。
2、工作後的工作經驗並不能給你申請加分,但如果你在企業表現好,又有一個非常出色的人欣賞你,給你寫封推薦信,這樣的幫助還是很大的。有了工作經驗後,申請商學院會更有優勢。
3、大專畢業是不能申請研究生的,到國外也是要從本科念起。但之前的學習,你已經拿到一些學分,所以可以和學校商量是否能免掉這些學分,早點畢業。
7. 有工作經驗後出國留學,可以嗎
有工作經驗後出國留學,可以嗎?
可以的,有了工作經驗可以去讀一些需要工作經驗才能申請的碩士學位,競爭應該會相對小點,工作經驗能很好的彌補GPA的不足,國外選校很看重工作經歷。
8. 有工作經驗後出國留學
1、你復的大學是國家重點大制學211、985,可以申請前30名的大學。大學成績差的話,要努力考GMAT、TOEFL,如果這些考試成績分數高點的話,是可以彌補一下的。
2、工作後的工作經驗並不能給你申請加分,但如果你在企業表現好,又有一個非常出色的人欣賞你,給你寫封推薦信,這樣的幫助還是很大的。有了工作經驗後,申請商學院會更有優勢。
3、大專畢業是不能申請研究生的,到國外也是要從本科念起。但之前的學習,你已經拿到一些學分,所以可以和學校商量是否能免掉這些學分,早點畢業。
9. 有工作經驗後出國留學
德國的話,你的情況很難申請到。
德國公立大學的研究生課程,一般都要211大學的本版科生申請。而且,權還需要有德福成績。
你只有雅思成績,可以考慮私立大學的英語授課課程,不過費用就會貴很多了!!
你有工作經驗,可以考慮英國與澳洲,特別是英國,研究生課程只需要一年時間,總體費用就比較少了,大概一年30萬左右就可以。
如果是要申請藝術設計類的課程,需要准備好優秀的作品集。
10. 出國留學工作經驗怎麼審核
看你的簽證和護照,還有老東家做背景調查就行了。