自荐信的错误例子

① 自主招生自荐信邮寄出去发现错误，还有办法补救吗急急急

1.马上来打电话给招生办自的老师，态度好点。一般都没事的。告诉老师你马上补交。
2.马上手写，既然是学校规定，这个肯定是没法改的，招生办的老师很多都是年轻老师，他们也是按规定办事，但是时间和选择权在他们手里，就要看你周旋的能力了。

② 英语自荐信1

以下意见仅供参考，谢谢！
1.democracy是名词不可以做定语，可以改成“名主的”形容词：democratic

2.She give me a lot of freedom 那个要加S

3.falsity用法不对，一般是虚伪的意思，要写“错误”可以用：fault

4. My dad is a knowledgeable man who can answer my questions mostly and always take interesting examinations with me.这句的TAKE要加S。

5.Because of them，听起来不爽，不如改成“Thanks to them”
6. this time they both agree with me to apply ASSIST ,这句把前面改成“both of them”比they both 要好

7.Without them, I cannot be so confident that I want to be an exchange student in America alone.这句话应该拆成两句说比较容易让人看懂：without them, I would notbe so confident. I want to be an exchange student in America alone.

8.but at school I change a lot.可以说：but school life changes me a lot.

9. I have a good health since I’m child because of lots of exercise with my father and I’m good at football which I’ve been playing more than 8 years. 这句同样太长了，要拆开：I am in good health since I was a child, because I do lots of exercises with my father. I am good at football as well, which I have been playing for more than 8 years.

10.Even I got an silver medal with the shot match in middle school.
你是要说“我在中学甚至得过短跑银牌”？那你可以说：Once in middle school, I have got a silver medal in a short distance race.银牌用A不用AN。

11.both in last school and now你是说：“在我以前的学校和现在学校”么？那你可以说：both in my former and present school。

12.plans to take part in a body mechanics 你不可以用PLANS要用PLAN

13.Not only sport but also art is my interest。这句也有问题，你可以说：I am interested not only in sport but also in art.

14.The dance named the Persian Cat 不必说的这么复杂，《波斯猫》可以做同位语，就说：The dance Persian Cat就OK了
15.got the first wards 请问WARDS是不是写错字了啊？一等奖是the first award或者the first prize.

我尽力了。、你看着办吧

③ 下面是某中学高三学生参加高校自主招生所写的自荐信，其中在表达和格式方面有三处错误，请把它们找出来并